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Once,There was a man named Botan.He lived in Gielinor and was a personal friend of Saradomin.But one day,Botan contacted Zamorak and here's where the story begins!

Part 1-The Contact

Botan:Zamorak,I need your ultimate power to slay Saradomin.
Zamorak:How dare you mortal ask for power from me!
Botan:Silence fool!I will slay you if you don't obey me!
Zamorak: Die fool! (Zamorak shoots lightning at Botan)
Botan:You will pay!Aaaaaaaah!
Zamorak:You are a fool!

Botan:Wh-Where am I?
Saradomin:How dare you betray me mortal.
Botan:I was only going to Zamorak to slay him!
Saradomin:Enough mortal!I know you went to him for help to slay me!
Botan:Fine...But now that you know you must die!
Saradomin:Try me mortal.It will only result in your end.
Botan: (Botan whispers) I have to get out of here..
Saradomin:Leave mortal if you wish to live.
Botan: (Botan teleports to Varrock)
Botan:I need my own destructive power...A sword!Yes,I will create my own magic sword!

Part 2-The Blade and The Kingdom
Botan:After years of work,my creation is complete!It shall be called Botan's Blade!

Botan travels for years until he reaches Falador
Botan:Yes,here I will create my kingdom!!!I will need to recruit soldiers first...

Botan creates an want ad-

Join the Botan Empire!High pay and Glory here!!!

Soon Botan has an army of over 1,000,000 men now he creates his kingdom.

Botan:The Botan Empire is Glourious!I will now kill the gods!

Botan:We will need to build a bridge to the heavens...Clotic!

General Clotic:Yes sir,King Botan?
Botan:Get the builders to make a bridge to the heavens!
General Clotic:Yes sir,King Botan.

Part 3-The Bridge
Botan:Yes,Yes!The bridge is complete!First we eliminate Saradomin and then Zamorak!Muahahaha!!
Captain Mong:Sir,the soldiers are ready to siege Saradomin.
Botan:THEN WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!?LET'S GO!!

Part 4-The Siege
Botan:Mages and Archers!Lead the way!
Saradomin:I will eliminate you mortal if you dont back down.
Botan:Bring it! (Botan and Saradomin pull out they're swords)
Botan:To the death!
Saradomin:To the death!

Botan and Saradomin clash swords for a few minutes and Saradomin freezes Botan in place.
Botan:Whaaa..?
Saradomin:Now,mortal meet your end!
Botan:Nooooooo!

Part 5-The Confusion
Most think Botan met his end but some say every full moon Botan comes alive and kills someone.

The End!

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Thx!

Months from Varrock to Falador? A help wanted add getting 1M people "soon?" Epic wowz...

Tbh I wasn't that impressed by the story. Too short, not much happened besides him getting beaten, no description... and I just generally don't like scripted formats. But don't listen to me...

Well, honestly it was a little confuzzling. The main reason I don't like scripted stories is that you can't go overboard with descriptions, a trait that, in my opinion, separates an okay author from a good author.


P.S. I made a story called "Zaros' Blade" did joo copy my title!?


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