Play Now

RuneScape Forums

  • Jump to Thread:
Story Discussions
  Mod�Mark�H
Jagex Mod

07-Apr-2010 12:57:38
Hello,

This is a refreshed sticky for any budding authors to ask for and give feedback on their stories.

All standard forum rules apply.

If you are, or would like to be, a member of a hierarchy-based writing group, please ensure your thread remains story-based.

Happy writing! :)
  Infinity�A8
Forum Mod

07-Apr-2010 12:58:59
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 13:03:26 by Infinity�A8
The first post belongs to me! Uahahahahaha!




Story Name: \\||~Nightmare~||//
Genre: Horror
Length: 24 Chapters, 80 Story Posts
Quickfind Code: 49-50-327-56159462
Synopsis: Noah has been plagued by horrific nightmares for weeks on end. But when his nightmares start to turn real and Varrock is threatened by them, what will he and his two companions choose to do?



Story: \<-_The Fatal Glitch_->/
Genre: Mystery/Suspense
Length: 25 Chapters, 96 Story Posts
Quickfind Code: 49-50-702-56883030
Synopsis: A strange glitch has appeared within Runescape that gives the supernatural ability to kill people as they are killed ingame to a handful of players. Some seek to use this power for evil while the others attempt to utilise it to stop the others. A deadly game of cat and mouse ensues with people's lives at stake.



Story: ||...Agony...||
Genre: Horror
Length: 23 Chapters, 111 Story Posts
Quickfind Code: 49-50-307-57974397
Synopsis: Veronica just wanted a quiet life with no monsters, no ghosts, no zombies and definately no bloodshed. But Edgeville is a haunted town and as Veronica and her group of friends are about to discover, things are about to get even more treacherous as they are left to struggle for their own survival alone.


�~Infinity Manor

Step in if you dare! Behold all my works and achievements under one horrifying household!

49-50-294-59760787
Jim�Ba�Jamy

07-Apr-2010 13:01:56
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 13:05:04 by Jim�Ba�Jamy
Profiled :)

Nice stories Infinity. Very long for me, I'll try to find some time to read them when I have some. :P
Amoraten

07-Apr-2010 13:30:57
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 13:47:54 by Amoraten
"...He knew that as night descended in Hallowvale Woods, it fell swiftly like a guillotine..."

"The Dark Lane" rambles on to chapter four... (QFC - 49-50-530-60629813)

I am telling the same story but from the different perspective of the witnesses... (the Old Oak, the Man, the Owl etc)... the ending should not yet be assumed :P

Any cricital feedback is greatly appreciated and I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing :)
julia400941

07-Apr-2010 15:02:41
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 15:05:49 by julia400941
great stories! loved them.:) i have my entry of the aog short story competition 49-50-581-60525568 hope you enjoy it and constructive feedback is very much welcome. page 106 btw^_^
Prefix�Three

07-Apr-2010 15:17:37
Rebirth at last!
Englishkid62

07-Apr-2010 15:55:32
Last edited on 29-Apr-2010 02:02:09 by Englishkid62
It was the golden age of the game, when all sorts of underhand and criminal activities were raging in the realms of RuneScape, long before the updates on the 10th December and 2nd January 2008, that respectively removed the unbalanced trade and the wilderness. Before then, bots, scammers were roaming on the land and spoiling the game for its players. There were complaints, and rumours, that the whole RuneScape economy was going to collapse if something wasn't to be done about them soon...

But why RuneScape? Why work so hard to spoil the game for others? What is it so priceless that they are trying to obtain?


~~The Priceless~~

QFC: 49-50-890-60645640


This story is 32 posts long.


Praises for this rewrite so far:

'Wow... truly stupendous. This is by far the most powerful piece of literature I have ever read on these forums.' --Sira

'After careful deliberation, I have come to the conclusion that I like the rewrite...The deepness of this story is astounding. It truly gives you the blatant truth of our world on a platter, whether you want to see it or not.' --Level

'I just finished this, and I must say it's absolutely wonderful...I could truly feel the emotions of the characters, and I love what you've put into this story. It's quite possibly one of the best works (if not THE best) that I've read thus far.' --Cheeze

'This story still strikes a chord deep in my heart, still causes me to shiver, still makes me feel...more alive than when I began. It inspires me to love the unloved, step out and help the helpless. You have penned a masterpiece of literature, English, and hopefully this one will live on, and inspire, longer than the last. Marvelously done! Bravo!' --Caydock

'Utterly impressive in scope, style and meaning. It was an utter pleasure to read this.' --Amoraten
Elitemage14

07-Apr-2010 17:13:52
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 17:19:28 by Elitemage14
"Terrible... Absolutely terrible," raves the New York Times.

"I cannot tell a lie, this story truly sucks," claims the ghost of George Washington. "Why am I reviewing stories? Because I can."

"This story is so awful it gave ME nightmares!" praises Stephen King.


What story could be generating all this buzz? There's only one answer: -+^-�- Straightjacket -�-^+- 49-50-158-6053437

Give in to the insanity.
Douze

07-Apr-2010 17:18:34
Last edited on 07-Apr-2010 17:19:24 by Douze
Nice stories i liked the finnish its typical old finnish type of poetry.
Elitemage14

07-Apr-2010 17:18:49
Hey everyone. I just created a new thread called the Adopt a Writer Program to help out the newer members of this forum by pairing them up with one of the story forum's 'veterans', and through this bond helping you grow and develop as both a writer and member of this community.

If you're interested then please check it out.


Adopt a Writer Program

49-50-43-60644782
Quick find code: 49-50-727-60717806