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 #### Why using a blocker is **very important**
 
-In response to this [ridiculously over-the-top pure propaganda](http://www.tomsguide.com/us/ad-blocking-is-stealing,news-20962.html) piece, whose purpose is to manipulate you into compliance to the one specific business model they chose for themselves.
+In response to this [ridiculously over-the-top pure propaganda](http://www.tomsguide.com/us/ad-blocking-is-stealing,news-20962.html) piece, whose purpose is to manipulate people into compliance to the one specific business model ad-driven web sites chose for themselves.
 
 **Left:** without a blocker: 124 domains (note that I had Flash plug-in disabled, it would have been worse if it had been enabled -- I wasn't ready to go that far to make my point).